This paper is actually ironically the writting style that i have. I read this paper and it felt like i had written it. The only difference is that this paper was organized very neatly. What i didnot like was the fact that this eprson kept on saying the word I to state her believs. We all know that in this class "I's" are prohibited. We have to tend away from our own opinions and state what the quotes say. This girl was missing her youtube link which is a big no-no. The list citings is actually very well thought out and the annotations were good. She could have written a title to introduce us to the topic so that we know what we are reading.
Last but not least i would have enjoyed this class better if the instructor would have given us a paper with the grade of "A" or maybe even "A" plus. That way we can actually copy the format and use a paper with such a high grade to show the readers what type of work is expected for this class. In conclusion i will take into consideration these little mistakes that this girl did so that i can improve my writting.
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